Meh, ok. One star. Artist made her out to be a giantess, especially with those extreme, unrealistic proportions. Otherwise, even with cheesy stuff, pretty good story.
This really sucked. The artwork was nice, but so confusing. The guys looked alike, so I couldn't tell who was who, and the changing the shading of their hair back and forth made it worse. Who was screwing who? I read it 4 times and still can't follow the story. The writing sucked. Why do the writers always give everyone similar names and switch between using last and first names so much? It makes rating drop from 5 to 0 because the story can not be followed. I won't even bother checking out the other chapters... not worth wasting my time.
Terrible art work... not the worst, but close. I think mama was the ugliest I've ever seen. The writing wasn't too good either, but the story wasn't a half bad idea, though I know I couldn't put my little guy in something full of another guy's spunk, and I definitely wouldn't allow something that had spunk on it in my mouth...
A whole lot of ppl (that's what manga and doujinshi are - stories), otherwise, we would just go to a pics site. ;)