Phartsalot's comments

6 years ago
#43371

Phartsalot on No Other Way

Artwork was fantastic. Story totally sucked - made no sense.

6 years ago
#43369

Phartsalot on Osananajimi Haa Haa / 幼馴染ﾊｧﾊｧ

Well... I guess that's a good way of telling your best friend that:
1. The girl he's in love with is a slut, if not as innocent as he thinks she is
2. That you wanted the same girl and she chose you over him - Ha! In yo face!
3. Don't wanna be friends anymore
4. Why the girl of his dreams isn't interested in him

6 years ago
#43368

Phartsalot on A Nurse From Outer Space

great artwork. nice story idea. Everything else just plain sucked.

6 years ago
#43367

Phartsalot on Onii-chan to xxx wa Imouto no Gimu desu / お兄ちゃんとXXXは妹の義務ですっ

Great artwork, good story, bad writing. It is contradictory. He says he was having trouble having sex very well on his date, not that he couldn't or didn't have sex. So, next he is asked how he likes losing his virginity to his sister. Another amateur writer (he may not be, but this mistake is) who doesn't know what he's doing, so ruining the story... Shame

6 years ago
#43221

Phartsalot on Kuroi Hoken Iin / 黒い保健委員

With friends like her... Oh wait... I had no friends... :(

6 years ago
#43219

Phartsalot on How To Make A Naughty Red Riding Hood

BRAVO! BRAVO! Phenomenal ending... BRAVO! ENCORE!

6 years ago
#43216

Phartsalot on Sunshine Next Door

I think I'm in love...

6 years ago
#43215

Phartsalot on Saiminjutsu ni Kakerarete / 催眠術にかけられて

I have GOT to learn hypnotism... though you really can't hypnotize anyone into doing anything they aren't susceptible to do in the first place, for example: murder, fall in love, have sex with someone they don't want... There has to be a hint of desire in there. Truly erasing a memory through hypnotism is almost impossible as there is always a trigger that can accidentally be activated.

6 years ago
#43214

Phartsalot on Kneesock Hallelujah / ニーソハレルヤ前編

This is great art for action manga, but it REALLY sucks for hentai manga, hence the very low rating....

6 years ago
#43213

Phartsalot on Sis Lover / シスらば

Paramount ending...

6 years ago
#43210

Phartsalot on Crime Girls Saishuuwa Kouhen / クライムガールズ最終話後編

Great story. I wish all of these hentai manga and doujenshi were actual stories like this... stories you can fap to, but still come away with something. That's what makes a great writer. The rest are all amateurs. This, my friends, is what's known as, "Literotica", which is something that I like to write. If only I had an artist. Guess I should publish my stuff first instead of just giving it out... lol

6 years ago
#43135

Phartsalot on Memories From Seaside School / 臨海学校の思い出

Hope bastard goes to jail

6 years ago
#43132

Phartsalot on Shorts Prince / 下着王子

And I thought I had a panty fetish... well for me, it's mostly the cameltoe...

6 years ago
#43130

Phartsalot on Togetoge

Wow... so touched, and I don't mean in the way I was expecting...

6 years ago
#43129

Phartsalot on Childish Friendship / オサナなナジミ

So heart breaking at first. But perfect ending...

6 years ago
#42856

Phartsalot on Meikko no Oshiri wo Training Suru Hon / めいっこのおしりをトレーニングする本

Eh, did pages or frames get mixed up? Almost impossible to follow.

6 years ago
#42686

Phartsalot on Boku To Kanojo No Hikakuteki Naisho No Nichijou Chapter 2

Don't know where he got 2 guys from...

6 years ago
#42673

Phartsalot on

Thanks for the warning, everyone. I will definitely pass.

6 years ago
#42650

Phartsalot on Boy Meets Girl! / Boy Meets Girl！

Very Nice.

6 years ago
#42649

Phartsalot on

Jeez! I'm starting to hate rewrites. They just suck. The dialogue is the worst ever. No imagination.

6 years ago
#42609

Phartsalot on Gimme Love!

Gotta LOVE that ending. ROFL

6 years ago
#42608

Phartsalot on Nanchakuchi / 軟着地

artwork sucked, especially towards the end. Dialogue was good until the last 5 or so pages. Almost got a rise, but just from the story idea.

6 years ago
#42574

Phartsalot on Gakkyuu Iinchou No Houkago | The Class Representative'S After School Activities / 学級委員長の放課後

Started out really cute with good artwork. Then it story got bad and the artwork nothing but scratches and scribbles.

6 years ago
#42565

Phartsalot on Killer Nee-Chan / KILLER姉ちゃん

Was great story until the last couple of frames...

6 years ago
#42528

Phartsalot on

Would like to see the original instead... this rewrite kinda sucked.

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