This had the worst artwork ever. Couldn't even tell who was who, and there was so much cramming up of the space, couldn't tell what was going on. I can't even give it half a star.
reallovesexdolls dot com.... getting mine soon... ;)
Or, I'll get my loli doll at alibaba...
I gave it only half a star. The artwork sucks, and the writing is some of worst. Would have been a good story under another writer, but this one couldn't stay on one thought, so it wasn't easy to follow.
Too short. It just barely woke me willy... then it ended... willy, willy disappointing... Still, loved it.
Good story, just the artwork totally sucked. Worst ever.
My favorite ghost story.
Got sick of, "Mommy mommy." There is no story here, just the same words repeated over and over and over and over. Not worth reading or rating. Couldn't even get a hard on from all of the "mommy mommy". Jeez, learn how to write.
The artwork would have been nice had the artist drawn some of the girls with realistic boobs instead of disgusting knee knockers. I mean, I like big boobs like any other guy, but some of these "artists" renditions are just sickening... I can't even get a hard on. Well, another fap ruined.
SLIMER!!! SLIME ME!!!
good story, artwork is less than adequate. Where do they find these artists... a Cracker Jack box?
Yeah... If she was a virgin, then I'm Santa Claus... Nice story...
The artwork was really good, but the story was, eh, ok at best. Didn't even get a stiffy from this one.
This REALLY SUCKED! Artwork 0/10, story 0/10, dialogue 0/10. Nothing made sense. Just babble.
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I just may do that. Out of hundreds I've read, 10%+ seem to draw balls for a pussy. Another 10% draw so much crap, you can't make heads or tails out of anything... makes you wonder if it is a 3 yr old with a crayon doing the artwork.
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Another pretty good one ruined by bad artwork. Don't think some of these artists have seen a real pussy... they keep drawing them like a pair of balls with a slit.
>>12441 @ Bloody smile
I couldn't agree more...
RL SUX!!! We can only dream...
I wish she was my little sister... <3 <3 <3
Gives new meaning to, "Love thy neighbor"...
Are mothers really like that? I didn't have one, so I wouldn't know...
It was great until she offered to drink his piss.

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