DIABETES!!!!!!!!!!
Very sweet and adorable story. 3 thumbs up...
murder is the only thing going through my mind.
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Eh, it's just that rewrites suck. At least this one had a tiny bit of a story.
I normally don't do gender benders, but I had a gut feeling about this one, and it was great.
Hmm... Now I'm curious. I wonder... Would being able to change sexes be good?
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Nice way to show her husband and her cousin's wife who they each really belonged to...
>>43018 @ Anonymous55183
I agree fully 100%. I almost closed this out. Glad I stayed to the end.
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Yep, but that's rewrites for you. The people who do the rewrites have no imagination to make a story. That's why they all suck. I think out of all of the rewrites I've read, only 2 were decent. One actually had half a story.
>>24668 @ Oppai.Monitor
Yeah, me too. I thought she was playing possum. Would've made for a great ending...
>>14117 @ Anonymous
I learned that you can be in love without even knowing it...
Such a happy story. Why can't rl be just as happy?
ending made no sense
Excellent story.
Oh God!!! PLEASE do not go the tentacle route... I absolutely hate tentacle eroge. Such a good series, I'd hate to drop it just because it goes a route I don't like.
The first couple stories were great, but went downhill fast.
Translation sucked which made the story bad. Artwork is less than mediocre. Almost pretty good.
Artwork really sucked. There seems to be artists now who thinks jamming frames is good artwork, but it isn't. It's like a 3 yr old with a crayon in a coloring book.
It would have been great had the artwork been good. The rear view of the girls looks like they have balls. Another crappy artist that's never seen that view of a woman or girl before....
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rewrites suck so bad
Everything about that sucked. Well, the artwork was good.
I gave it up on the 3rd page. There is nothing, no story, just words thrown on the page, nothing makes sense. There's no characters, no development, no story, no plot, nothing. Just drawing, and words thrown on the page. In fact, it looks like a whole bunch of frames and pages from differentmanga that's been cut up and thrown together.
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I had no choice but to favorite this one. I LOVED every bit of it....
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Some of the worst artwork. Can't tell the boy's face from his mom's. Too much in the frames, then the writing is allover the place so you can't follow. This was crap.

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