>>20626 @ Anonymous31323 It's not that they were fat, it was that they were grossly ugly. There are a lot of BBW out there, but these girls were all fugly, and the artist made them all look exactly the same.... they all looked like the mom. The breakfast frames, they all looked different, but after that, it was only the mom. The artist sucks. He crams too much in the frames where you can't make anything out. That isn't art.
I HATE rewrites... BUT THIS ONE WAS GREAT!!! This is the first rewrite I gave full marks to, and even added it to my faves... after I had a big shot of insulin. It had an actual story to it, great dialogue - the author used his imagination, and not just his pencil dick to write only, "Fuck my cunt" in every dialogue bubble like the others. olddog51, or whatever, needs to take a lesson from this guy.
Nice. I love seeing a fat person getting some too. I sure wish I could... :( I don't think she should diet if he likes her like that... after all, all he has to do is give that belly a good slap and ride the waves in...
A big, fat, ugly guy getting a pretty girl. I love it. If only it was that way in RL. I'm short, fat, ugly, and a real loser, so it is nice to see something like this. Full marks. ;)
Well, olddog51 does it again. His lack of imagination, taste, vocabulary, and writing skills had me actually vomiting by page 3. I hate rewrites because most of these so called, "authors" lack imagination, but at least they have more, and a modicum of taste and vocabulary skills than this guy. I wish they would make the authors of rewrites list the name of the original because the artwork was nice and I bet it had a good story.
I'm a writer, not an artist. My youngest daughter is the artist, and she was winning blue ribbons for her art when she was only 4yrs old. She stopped doing artwork about 5 yrs ago, but seems to be getting back into it now. She's a teen. My oldest daughter is a singer.
But I'm always looking for good artists because I might go from writing novels to someday writing doujinshi. I already have a few literoticas either written or in the works. I'm sure your next statement will be, "Well, if your daughter is so talented, why don't you get her to do it?" Simply because she doesn't like hentai at all. She really doesn't care for anything like anime, manga, or doujinshi, especially hentai. ;)
I might have actually enjoyed this ad it not been artwork by a 3 yr old with a crayon. I couldn't make anything out. Why do they throw a bunch of ink on a page with no definition and call it artwork?
Thank God for Life Alert!!! I've fallen and I need an insulin shot... Make it a double... No, a triple... Hell, just bring the whole damned vial... A fresh one...
Cute, but in tennis, the girls wear something like spandex shorts or bloomers under the skirt... not a slip. Some even where gym shorts under the skirt.
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It's not that they were fat, it was that they were grossly ugly. There are a lot of BBW out there, but these girls were all fugly, and the artist made them all look exactly the same.... they all looked like the mom. The breakfast frames, they all looked different, but after that, it was only the mom. The artist sucks. He crams too much in the frames where you can't make anything out. That isn't art.
I don't think she should diet if he likes her like that... after all, all he has to do is give that belly a good slap and ride the waves in...
I'm a writer, not an artist. My youngest daughter is the artist, and she was winning blue ribbons for her art when she was only 4yrs old. She stopped doing artwork about 5 yrs ago, but seems to be getting back into it now. She's a teen. My oldest daughter is a singer.
But I'm always looking for good artists because I might go from writing novels to someday writing doujinshi. I already have a few literoticas either written or in the works. I'm sure your next statement will be, "Well, if your daughter is so talented, why don't you get her to do it?" Simply because she doesn't like hentai at all. She really doesn't care for anything like anime, manga, or doujinshi, especially hentai. ;)