Phartsalot on - Change!! -
That was the greatest. Almost a gender bender. Loved how they switched roles.
Phartsalot on Spoiled Girl
Now that is yandere... needs the tag...
Yeah. Been there. Stories like this make me cry.
Great series... Loved it all.
I don't believe it for one second.... I don't know... mom, a virgin... Well, I guess I'll head to my beach house in Nevada...
I was so excited about this one. It looked so good. The artwork ruined it though, as it was a total mess, then the story is all over the place. It has the potential, but is too lacking in the tow most important fields...
Cute and sweet... and painful. If only RL was like that...
Phartsalot on Lust Seven
oooo.... temporal paradox... how ex-scifi-ting....
She loved him... She really loved him...
They call that tsundere? They need a lesson in tsundere.
"No. Yes. No. Okay." That is what is known as being wishy washy, not tsundere.
"I wouldn't touch you with my dog's lips! Show me what's so special and maybe I'll think about indulging in that minuscule, worthless thing that you think is so great." Now that is being tsundere.
Yeah, I think she had it planned from the beginning... While he was doing things in her body, you know she had to be doing things in his...
Great story. Too bad I had to rate it so low due to the artwork. When they cram too much crap into a pane, it really screws it up.
I so want to be babied... however, though I'm a lolicon, I don't think I could go that young...
And 1 and 2, you wish it was you. 3 and 4, don't bolt for the door. 5 and 6, she needs more dicks. 7 and 8, she really prefers jail bait. 9 and 10, let's fap to this one again....
luv Luv LOVE THIS!!!!
Phartsalot on Oni or Shot
Beans, beans, the magical fruit....
Phartsalot on Bon Voyage
Hmm. Clever girl. I wonder... did she use onichan's paycheck to pay for those???
Phartsalot on
Terrible artwork, crappy dialogue, shitty writing.
Phartsalot on
It's a good story, great art, but just like all other rewrites, the dialogue sucks. It's like the writers of rewrites have no imagination.
Damn... wish I had her as a neighbor growing up...
Phartsalot on
Normally hate rewrites as the dialogue totally sucks, but those last couple of frames were epic. lol
In the words of Martha Stewart, "And that's a good thing."
neh... I thought so. I'd tell her to take that not-so-wonderful cooch and go stuff it somewhere else. I hate fake girls like that.
Still, great artwork and good story...
cute and funny
Page 21 had me rolling.
All I can say is... I don't know whether to envy the guy, or feel for him. Would that be Heaven? or Hell?

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